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5 Tips for Writing a Great Press Release
Contributed by Maj.
Paul Cianciolo, National Capital Wing
PAO
Sep 01,
2010 -- Press releases are a tricky
thing to get right. One simple
mistake -- like a poor headline or a
mere typo -- can make you lose
readers, and once they're gone,
they're not coming back. Good press
releases, however, can catch the
attention of reporters, resulting in
news stories and more.
Here are
five tips on how to make sure your
press release gets noticed (in a
good way):
A press
release, much like your traditional
newspaper story, should highlight
the most important news right off
the bat. Don’t try to get too
creative or come up with a witty
lead paragraph, because chances are
if a reporter can’t tell what your
press release is about, he or she
will stop reading it. In other
words, pick the few details that you
think people absolutely, hands down
need to know about whatever it is
you’re selling, and stick those at
the very top. You can fill in the
background and supporting details
lower in the release in the order of
most important to least important,
just like your standard “inverted
pyramid”-style news article.
Make Sure Your Headline is Strong
The
headline should read like an even
shorter, more summed-up version of
the first few sentences. It should
convey the same points in fewer
words. You can also pack a few
additional details into a subhead.
It may seem redundant since the same
information will just be rehashed in
the lead of the release, but again,
the goal is not to be witty or artsy
here. The goal is to get a reporter
to spend 60 seconds reading what you
have to say.
That
said, it’s probably best to match
the headline of the release with the
subject line of the email in which
you are sending out the release (but
you may have to shave off yet
another word or three to make it
inbox-friendly). The truth is, many
press releases just get deleted
right off the bat, so a good
headline can mean the difference
between getting some eyeballs on
your news and having it sent
straight to the e-mail trash bin.
Don’t Leave Room for Confusion
A press
release is supposed to be the
gateway to a story, not the
story itself, and good reporters
generally won’t regurgitate press
releases as news. But sometimes,
depending on what the news is, a
press release might just say it all,
and a reporter can craft an item out
of it by simply taking off the spin
and relaying the details in a more
newsy way. In either case, none of
those details should be murky or
seem to not line up or leave room
for confusion or misinterpretation.
As a reporter, I can’t stand getting
press releases with information that
is jumbled or unclear, even if I
plan to make calls and ask follow-up
questions.
Dot Your “I’s” and Cross Your “T’s”
It’s bad
when a reporter makes a factual,
spelling or grammatical error in a
news story. But mistakes happen,
especially when you’re on deadline.
The deadline for writing a press
release, however, is most likely far
more generous than the amount of
time reporters have to file their
copy. Press releases can usually be
proofread several times before they
are sent out -- there is no excuse
for careless errors. Not the biggest
deal, but it will make you look
silly, considering the people you’re
sending the release to are
professional writers. Always have a
second or third set of eyes look it
over before you pull the trigger.
Personalize It
Not the
release itself, but your method of
delivering it. If there are a few
reporters or editors in particular
that you really want to score
coverage from, include a personal
note with the email containing the
release. At the very least, it will
make them feel like they are
actually hearing from a human being,
and it will give you a chance to
make a succinct case for why you
think the news would be of interest
to them. At the same time, don’t
stretch it. If the news actually
doesn’t seem like it will be of
interest to them, it can’t hurt to
send the release anyway. But don’t
try to force an angle that isn’t
there.
Joe Pompeo, Business Insider
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